中考英語滿分作文鑒賞

 

現在我們周圍的環境污染越來越嚴重。作為一個中學生，我們應節約資源，保護環境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個“低碳生活”的中學生。請以“My Low--carbon Life”為題，寫一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

內容包括：

1.地球的污染越來越嚴重，我們能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空氣污染。

2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上學、離開教室及時關燈和電扇、充分利用紙張、節約用水等。

3.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。

 

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文的題目已經給出，不計入總詞數。

My Low--carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.

 

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My Low-carbon Life

 

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.

 

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

 

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.

 

【寫作要求】

每當朋友之間即將分手的時候，耳邊常常會響起這首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，請你忘記我……”。請你以Friends為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，可以圍繞主題適當展開，闡述交友的重要性和好處。

 

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Friends

What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.

 

【寫作要求】

最近，你們班就“是否應該幫助陌生人”展開了討論，同學們就這一話題意見不一，你的看法如何?根據所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”為題，寫一篇短文。

	原因
贊成	幫助他人是美德； 幫助他人就是幫助自己；
反對	怕陷入麻煩； 怕被誤解；
你的觀點?（至少兩點）

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發揮；

3）詞數：100左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；

4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

參考詞匯：美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

 

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Should We Help Strangers?

 

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

 

Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．

 

However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．

 

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．

 

【寫作要求】

某英語報開展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比賽，請你根據提示的內容，簡要描述并適當發表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。內容要點如下：

1. 盡管我們常常感到有壓力，但是應該找到合適的方式來解壓。可以選擇穿像藍色和白色一樣的冷色調來使我們自己感到放松；

2. 我們應該足夠細心，因為“失之毫厘，謬以千里”；

3. 也應該在課業和業余愛好之間取得平衡，試著安排好自己的空余時間；

4. 任何時候都不要失去信心。通過努力學習，我們會取得大的進步。

5. 有問題時，我們…

要求：1. 內容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 詞數90個左右；

3. 第5點的內容需展開合理想象，用2句話補充完整。

 

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How to Deal with Our Study Problems

 

Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress. 

 

We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work. 

 

When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.

 

【寫作要求】

學校英語社團在舉辦征文比賽，請你根據以下提示內容，寫一篇題為“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英語文章。內容要點如下：

1. 對我影響最大的人是我的媽媽，她四十幾歲；

2. 她總是耐心傾聽我的問題，并建議我如何解決它們；

3. 作為一名醫生，她常說再怎么仔細也不為過。她總是加班，把她的大部分時   

間都奉獻給了工作；

4. 所以，我認為她不僅是位好媽媽，也是名好醫生。

5. 我希望 ……

要求：1. 內容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 詞數90個左右；

3. 第5點的內容需展開合理想象，用2-3句話補充完整。

 

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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

 

My mother is the person who has influenced me most. 

 

She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. 

 

I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself. 

 

【寫作要求】

假設不久前你們學校為貧困地區的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動。請據此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學生英文報寫一篇報道，內容要點如下：

1. 目的：為貧困地區的孩子們籌款

2. 10月23日，星期六

3. 路徑：學校—市中心

4. 簡況：學生把自己分成四人一組，出發前計劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動過程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌得善款5萬多元。

5. 感受：每個人都很累，但都很高興，因為…

注意：1. 報道須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 第5要點的內容須用至少2句話展開合理想象，作適當發揮；

3. 詞數80個左右。

 

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Walk for children in poor areas   

Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.

 

It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end. 

 

We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

 

【寫作要求】

“保護環境，人人有責”，你想成為一名綠色使者嗎？請行動起來吧！其實，環保就在我們身邊。請以“How to Be a Greener Person” 為題，寫一篇短文。

注意：

1.表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；

2.短文詞數90 左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort

How to Be a Greener Person?

It’s our duty to protect our environment around us.      

 

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 How to be a greener person

 

It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us. 

 

When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music or spit in pulic. 

 

Let’s do something to protect our environment.

 

【寫作要求】

“燦爛星空，誰是真的英雄?”做出驚天動地業績的人是英雄，為追求真理獻出生命的人是英雄，在平凡崗位上默默奉獻的人是英雄……

一．Dr Norman Bethune     1．Natlonality(國籍): Canada         2．Hobby: taking photos         3．Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools	二．Liu Xiang 1．Nationality: China 2．Hobby: singing 3．Main stories: won the first 4．Olympic gold medal in the men' s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne

從上面信息卡中選擇一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart為題寫一篇短文。

要求：①包含所選信息卡上的內容；②適當拓展，如學英雄的感想、行動等；③不能出現表明你身份的信息；④詞數80左右，不含已給出部分。

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts.  For me,                                                                                    

 

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The Hero in My Heart

 

As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.

 

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

 

I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.

 

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The Hero in My Heart

 

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

 

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well. 

 

With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.

 

【寫作要求】

請以“My Favourite Great Book”為題, 根據下面的問題寫一篇80個詞左右的短文, 注意適當表達自己的看法。

1. Who is the writer of the great book?

2. What is the main idea of the book?

3. Who are the important characters?

4. What’s the theme of the story?

 

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My Favourite Great Book

 

My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. 

 

Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a cave. And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.

The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.

 

【寫作要求】

某英文報社正就青少年與父母關系這一話題開展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據以下要點, 寫一篇80個詞左右的英語短文參加此次活動:  

1. 父母規矩太多, 過于強調學習成績, 不理解自己等問題;

2. 你對這些問題的看法;

3. 你與父母保持良好關系的做法。

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out                                                

 

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How to keep a good relationship with parents

 

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

 

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

 

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.

 

【寫作要求】

Mary在學校參加了一個Buddy Club, 從那以后，她改變了很多。請你結合下面所給的提示，寫一篇英語短文。

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy, quiet, get nervous easily	brave, outgoing…
Hobbies	reading	reading, singing…
Abilities		good at dancing, singing…

要求:

1. 覆蓋要點，可以合理增加細節；

2. 80詞左右，開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.        

 

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Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

 

Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.

 

People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.

 

【寫作要求】

以“My Weekend Housework”為題寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過的家務活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務活和不喜歡做的家務活。用英語寫一篇70詞左右的短文。要求：內容完整，意思連貫，符合邏輯，表達正確。

 

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My Weekend Housework

On last Saturday morning I got up at about seven o’clock. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon I cleaned the yard. After that I folded my clothes and made my bed.

 

【寫作要求】

實現有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關系，不僅要善于表達，更要善于傾聽。請你根據表格中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“Being a Good Listener”的英文演講稿。

注意：1．詞數90左右。短文開頭和結尾部分己為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2．短文需包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；

3．短文中不要出現具體的學校姓名利人名。

Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon，everyone!

Today I’d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you.                                                                  

Thank you for your listening!

 

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Being a Good Listener

 

Good afternoon, everyone!

 

Today I’d like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you.

 

Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people.

 

Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.

 

We’d better be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keep silent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.

 

Thank you for your listening!

 

【寫作要求】

為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以”安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。

1.慎重交友      2.遇險報警      3.安全飲食      4. 其他(1-2點)

注意：1)內容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發揮

2)表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；

3)詞數80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad

How to keep safe?  

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. 

First,                                                                                    

 

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How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. 

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.     

In short, safety must come first !

 

【寫作要求】

你喜歡閱讀嗎？請你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 為題寫一篇有關閱讀的短文。

內容包括：

1. 你的閱讀習慣（喜歡的書籍、閱讀的時間地點、購書方式等等）。

2. 閱讀帶給你什么益處（至少兩點）。

3. 號召大家都讀書。

作文要求：

 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2. 語句連貫，詞數80詞左右。

 

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Reading---A good Habit

 

Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.

 

Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.

 

Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!